Thursday, 7 October 2010
Autumn Magpie Tales#35
She looked down at her wrinkled hands, the autumn years of her life had truly come. ‘So this is it,’ she thought, ‘I might as well give in and be my age.’ She put on her glasses, a real necessity these days. There were things to do and her household goods to pack up. The residential apartment she was moving to was on the ground floor, so she would still have garden to look out at and she had been assured that she could have some pots of plants just outside her door. It was with a heavy heart that she started sorting her nik-knacks, all collected over the years. Photographs of herself and her beloved Will went into the box labelled ‘To take’ and books and lots of other bits into the boxes labelled ‘Charity shop.’ It was hard to make the decisions of what to take, she knew there wasn’t a lot of room in the little apartment. ‘They’re only things,’ she kept telling herself, but they held so many happy memories. She was stirred from her thoughts by the shrill tone of her phone.
The voice at the other end filled her heart, so there was no room for those memorable items she thought she would miss.
‘Hello grandma, Mummy asks are you packed yet? I can’t wait till you are living just round the corner from us, can I really have tea with you some days after school?’
‘Yes love, I am nearly ready, tell Mummy that the van is here to pack the furniture that’s left for me to take to my new home. I am looking forward to having you near too, I won’t have to worry about driving on that motor way I can just walk a short way, meet you from school and have a lovely time with you.
I can teach you to knit and crochet and sew, just like I taught your Mum, these old hands can still do that. It is going to be just wonderful.'
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Oh this is just lovely :o)
ReplyDeleteA very serious and well crafted take on the prompt. You have turned literal "leaves" into a metaphor for the creep of the years.
ReplyDelete"Golden lads and girls all must . . . " etc.
Loved that you turned a seeming negative into a positive! Well done, I enjoyed reading. :-)
ReplyDeleteMy Magpie
My hands are beginning to wrinkle like leaves. oy. Lovely, lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteThe autumn of our years,
ReplyDeleteNothing to be afraid of.
Very nice tale.
A Paradise of Spring
Well written, moving...
ReplyDeleteSo bittersweet ... and so true, each of her thoughts and emotions.
ReplyDeleteThat is precious.
ReplyDeletewell done- turning a hard move into a welcome move.
ReplyDeletethe hands....yes
ReplyDeletebut this was a lovely touching bit of writing
that spoke a truth
Lovely approach to this magpie... how wonderful was the transition from a not so enticing move to an amazing of teaching and sharing life to the child... err I say grandchild.
ReplyDeleteYes it is going 2 b wonderful, you'll c. A nu normal.
ReplyDeleteSome of my contemporaries decided not to have children, so no grandchildren. This warm hearted little story brings a tear of 'thank you' for my loving tribe and how they make my older years fun and useful!
ReplyDeleteJust lovely. There can be a wonderful relationship between grandparent and grandchild. I know first hand! (Wrinkled at that. LOL)
ReplyDeleteThe scene you paint here, with your words, moved me right into the heart of what it might feel like to be old someday. I am equal parts fearful and encouraged. Thanks for your Magpie.
ReplyDeletelovely..what you lose and the riches you gain in the process
ReplyDeletebeautiful
Our autumns come, too. A lovely, inspiring and poignant piece.
ReplyDeletewhat started as a rather bleak picture sure ended very nicely...nice magpie
ReplyDeleteSo much lost, yet so much more gained. I look forward to those days.
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sweet!
ReplyDeleteNicely written Christine - I'm glad she had something to look forward to.... I thought it was going to end too sadly
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