Thursday, 21 October 2010

The Mirror Magpie Tales# 37

The mirror had always been on the hall wall.


It was there so she could glance at herself.

A quick look before she answered the door.

Then one day it showed too much,

Too much, not how she thought she looked

But deep laughter lines, the turkey neck, rheumy eyes.

So she took it down, shoved it behind a book case

Immediately she was back to her youth

Firm neck, bright eyes and smooth cheeks.

Who needs the truth she thought,

As she hobbled to open the door.

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14 comments:

  1. I love this - because its how I feel!

    In my grandmothers house her father removed all the mirrors "To stop them becoming too vain" - now I think I realise the truth in his actions!

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  2. isn't this the truth? I have become expert at having a mirror right in front of me and never taking a glance.

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  3. wonderful! We can always put away the mirror but the reflection remains does it not? I like this very much!

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  4. oh yes! I'd rather not have the reminder right in front of me...easier to stay young that way!

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  5. We all have our little games..maybe it's all in the lighting..I got a feeling of deep truth in this poem!

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  6. This is wonderful and I can so identify with it! LOL

    I think I may have to start hiding my mirrors very soon!

    Great Magpie, I loved it. :-)

    My Magpie

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  7. "turkey neck" made me laugh out loud!

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  8. if that is what it takes to feel youthful i will gladly hide the mirrors...smiles. nice magpie!

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  9. So well written...and so true! and a lovely ending too, well done :o)

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  10. If only it were that easy to put the truth-telling mirror away!

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  11. It's all right for some! I have to shave!

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