Sunday, 21 March 2010
Magpie Tales 6 .......' Nails??'
It was just a card box of nails but they had been the cause of their break up and yet she thought nails are supposed to join two things together.
How had it happened? More importantly, how did it happen? Her mind was hazy and her memory dimmed.
There they were on the shelf; she reached up and lifted the box down.
They were still very straight, still very shiny and still very sharp, all four of them.... only four? Wasn’t the box full? What had happened to the others?
Her finger touched the tip of one and she pressed down hard till a small drop of blood fell to the dusty floor. Suddenly her mind jerked back to a more bloody scene and as she looked at that single drop of blood, she remembered the floor swimming in blood. She made a soft sound almost like a cat mewing.
She hadn’t meant to strike him, but he had so enraged her.
The nails were there beside him, why did he buy them?
She had asked for screws; he came back with nails.
She wanted screws; he bought nails.
She only wanted screws; he thought she wanted nails;
She needed the screws, he had no idea they were so important.
She was without the screws and he had just a box of nails.
Stupid man she thought as she brought the hammer down on the head of first nail, soft in the head she mused as she brought down the hammer again on the second nail. The hammer came down time after time until there were only 4 nails left and the pool of blood covered most of the garage floor.
How silly to bring nails when all she wanted was.... what was it she wanted? But one thing she did know and now he knew too, that she hated the nails.
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This is scary... You are quite good at horror. Such an imagination you have. At least, I hope it is an imagination... (hopeful laughter)
ReplyDeleteUm. Christine. You're scaring me! Very gripping tale! Really like this one! Does Maxwell's Silver Hammer come to mind???
ReplyDeleteOh Christine, here's a side to you we haven't seen!! I'd be pretty nervous if you asked me to go to the shops for you!
ReplyDeleteGloriously murderous!
Ooooahhhhh! Christine! I've never given you my home address, have I? Great job!
ReplyDeleteScary! Great horror story, more, more! Love your work! (Maxwell's Silver hammer ~ha~ funny Rick)!
ReplyDeletedelightfully scary...yikes...maybe i will get both next time i go to the hardware, just in case...
ReplyDeleteMove over Alfred Hitchcock with the infamous Psycho --Christine is here
ReplyDeleteTo this day and I only saw the movie once- I have a glass shower door, go figure.
Good and scary,
Joanny
Eeeek!
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Wow Christine. I had to read the final lines more than once to be sure i had read what you wrote. Crikey. All over a few screwws. It's a beaut study in madness. I'd love to know the back story.
ReplyDeleteAs I see it, she wanted a screw! Relationships are hard these days..
ReplyDeleteThis was so much fun to read. You wrote horror so well too. There's no telling with madness, is there?
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YIKES!! This gave me the willies!
ReplyDeleteEeeek, take that hammer away from that girl please! She scares me.
ReplyDeleteGreat story...creepy but very good.
I enjoyed this a lot! I can picture the scene in my mind... Whether I want to or not!
ReplyDeleteYikes! That story snuck up on me - just what a scary tale should do. Well done!
ReplyDeleteFreaky!
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