Tuesday, 1 February 2011

The Brick Pathway Magpie Tales#51


She tugged her scarf tightly round her face against the icy wind.

‘Not far now ,’she thought as she turned into the narrow passageway. She looked down at the worn bricks and wondered about all the other hundreds of feet that had trudged this way through London. Perhaps some of Dickens characters had stepped this way in his stories; Scrooge or Bob Catchit or even the Artful Dodger.

‘Such silly thoughts,’ she thought. Hearing footsteps behind her made her stop and listen and shivers went up her spine. Was someone following her? She wished she hadn’t let her mind wander to Dickens stories as the ghost of times past seemed now to be in every dark corner. She glanced behind her. It was quiet, the sound of footsteps had stopped. She started to run and her scarf flew off behind her.

‘Hey,’ some one shouted.

But she didn’t stop as she raced toward the lamp shining at the end of the brick path. She quickly joined a group of people all jostling along the main pavements and walked at their pace, hoping she had left whoever it was behind her.

The stranger looked down at the scarf he held, that the young woman had dropped. It was rather nice and would suit his Mum nicely. He wouldn’t tell her where he had picked it up. She would be quite cross if he told her he had taken the short cut, the brick path passageway. According to his Mum wicked women hung around there waiting for a young chap just like himself. That woman who ran off in front of him, who dropped the scarf was probably looking for someone just like himself. It had been a scary time when she had looked behind her but he had ducked into the shadows out of sight.

‘ Yes....... Mum will like this scarf,’ he thought.
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14 comments:

  1. My son told me a story about when he took a shortcut through a small alley - he said the old lady coming towards him actually crossed herself as they passed! He was only 14 then and not in the least bit scarey looking - maybe she had been reading too much Dickens.

    Nice to see you back.

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  2. It's all in the perception, that is for sure!

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  3. You conveyed the mutual fear very well..and running towards the light always seems to save us..

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  4. I love how the story was written in the 2 parts. Each with it's own little personality! Love London...Love Dickens...xo

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  5. That was an amazing write of how wrong our perceptions can be. Think what would happen had they been brave enough to meet?

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  6. Very clever story, and quite believable!

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  7. A clever tale. How little we understand each other!

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  8. Two sides to every story. Very nicely done, I enjoyed it. :-)

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  9. That was terrific. I enjoyed this very much. : )

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  10. What a wonderful story! You have such a great imagination and a talent for telling a tale! And yep - you were right, we both saw a Dickensian vision in the cobbles! Great minds and all that! Brava!

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  11. Great story... remember many an alley that I would take as shortcuts, only to be told not to do so again.

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  12. scary bricks...now I see that
    maybe a ripper story will be written
    I wimped out and wrote a haiku
    wished I had seen scary first
    good job on this one

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  13. people are all alike when they go crazy or feel lost.
    cheers to your tale.
    well done,

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  14. What an interesting approach. Perception is everything. Good tale. I could feel her heart beating.

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