Thursday, 18 November 2010

Magpie #41


‘Only eleven more,’ she said.

‘You could do that in two months, Clara said.

‘I know I could, if I tried really, really hard,’ Said Laura.

Thoughts rushed through her mind. Once she reached that target weight all her troubles would be like sand in the wind. She’d be beautiful, people would look at her differently. No longer a blob stuffed into clothes much too small, no more trying to get her battle ship of a body into those magic knicks. She would find the man of her dreams too. Just eleven pounds that’s all.

She looked down at the small plate with the cream cake and the large late´ coffee. ‘I ‘ll start after this cake,’ she said. ‘Or I could chuck the cake and start now.’ It was so hard, so hard to give up the foods she liked. Already one hundred and two pounds lighter and the clothes she wore now, were more fashionable but she needed those eleven pounds more, to be really slim. She absent mindedly bit into the soft squelchy bun, cream oozed out of the side and the sweet icing stuck to her top lip. ‘If only I could lose those eleven pounds.’ she said and she swallowed the soft sticky sweet bun, ‘only eleven.’

Would you like another bun?’ asked Clara,’ they’re priced three for two.’

‘Oh alright then, pity to miss a bargain.’ Said Laura.

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9 comments:

  1. Those elusive last few pounds are always the hardest to shift, especially with such tempting bargains available

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  2. Every woman's little dilemma ... to eat or not to eat!

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  3. I can't blame her, sweets are just too tempting!

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  4. To heck with the man...Eat the cake and have it too!! How many times have I said "I'll start ___ tomorrow!" Sometimes pleasure is such a burden!

    Rick

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  5. Oh, there's a lesson her for us all! Good writing.

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  6. I make the best promises to stop smoking just before I crush the "last one" out.

    If there was no one left on earth but women, we'd all be fat, squishy, and have delightful deserts for our meals.

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  7. Always a challenge, isn't it. I, too, love a good sale and sweet stuff!

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  8. A BOGOF offer it's best to say 'Bog Off' to! LOL

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  9. Thanks for reminding me how hard it is to reach perfection..this was sooo good!!

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